Re: Stories of mine
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Hi Terry,
Thanks for your message. Nice to hear from you again.
Thanks also for answering my question about "Then, I'll stop writing." If you write, "I'd like to stop writing for now" that will be very clear and correct.
Your English is really fabulous, but I'd be happy to help you out in any way that I can. Can I make a suggestion about something you wrote? You said:
I think it made a confusion to you.
Try rephrasing this sentence in this way:
I think it made you feel confused.
This way is a little more direct and active.
And here is a small suggestion. You wrote:
I regard learning English as of interesting!!
This sentence is almost correct. You just need to remove the "of." So your sentence should say:
I regard learning English as interesting!!
I think it's great that you enjoy playing piano. I play piano too and, like you, I really like piano music. But these days I find myself learning a lot about Korean pop music. Do you have any favorite singers or bands that you often listen to?
Also, it's vacation season in Korea. At this time of year, a lot of families are planning a trip to the beach, countryside or some other place. How about your family? Will you be going away for awhile? Or will you be at home for a "stay-cation," just relaxing at home? Please let me know your plans in your next message.
All the best,
Gwen
Thanks for your message. Nice to hear from you again.
Thanks also for answering my question about "Then, I'll stop writing." If you write, "I'd like to stop writing for now" that will be very clear and correct.
Your English is really fabulous, but I'd be happy to help you out in any way that I can. Can I make a suggestion about something you wrote? You said:
I think it made a confusion to you.
Try rephrasing this sentence in this way:
I think it made you feel confused.
This way is a little more direct and active.
And here is a small suggestion. You wrote:
I regard learning English as of interesting!!
This sentence is almost correct. You just need to remove the "of." So your sentence should say:
I regard learning English as interesting!!
I think it's great that you enjoy playing piano. I play piano too and, like you, I really like piano music. But these days I find myself learning a lot about Korean pop music. Do you have any favorite singers or bands that you often listen to?
Also, it's vacation season in Korea. At this time of year, a lot of families are planning a trip to the beach, countryside or some other place. How about your family? Will you be going away for awhile? Or will you be at home for a "stay-cation," just relaxing at home? Please let me know your plans in your next message.
All the best,
Gwen
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